The graph illustrats the non-worker status in Australia during the year of 2012. the charts divides 2012 to 4 quaters, spliting the unemployees by location into two categories,the rulal and urben areas.
overall, the chances of getting a job both areas were pretty rough throughout the year. the percentage of hiring was unstable, making the unemployment situation wabble between 7 and 2 persent in both areas.
urben area unemployees rate were graduly rising from the first quarter ofthe year until the second at 4 persent. in third quarter, the rate droping as twice as it was. then it began to rose slightly at the forth quorter, before its highest jump at 5.5 perecent.
the rural areas has had a opposite direction from th urben one. it started at peack of 7% of non working population during first quarter. the secend one, more non workers has got hired, which caused a slight drop of rate at 4.5%. at mid year, the rate has rose slightly at 5%. Ever since , the rate went steady at 5% throughout the end of 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s in Australia during the year of 2012. the charts divides 2012 to 4 quaters, split...
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...lia during the year of 2012. the charts divides 2012 to 4 quaters, spliting the unemplo...
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...mployees by location into two categories,the rulal and urben areas. overall, the ch...
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... were pretty rough throughout the year. the percentage of hiring was unstable, maki...
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...tween 7 and 2 persent in both areas. urben area unemployees rate were graduly risi...
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...rea unemployees rate were graduly rising from the first quarter ofthe year until ...
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...the year until the second at 4 persent. in third quarter, the rate droping as twic...
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...at the forth quorter, before its highest jump at 5.5 perecent. the rural areas ...
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...re its highest jump at 5.5 perecent. the rural areas has had a opposite directio...
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...orking population during first quarter. the secend one, more non workers has got hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72067039106 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50660239279 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6905689158 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4166666667 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118887206276 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046748286589 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321363843759 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074680036976 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141767560002 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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