You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrateThe pie charts illustrates water usage in six different regions around the world. notably, europe
consumes the greatest quantity of water for industrial purposes,
closely
followed by north america.
The other four regions use significantly less water for industrial purposes, but use
water predominantly for agriculture.
both north america and europe consume much less water for use in agriculture than the other four
regions. In contrast, in three of those regions, africa, south east asia and central asia, water used
for agriculture accounts for more than 80% of total water consumed in each region. africa, south
east asia and central asia have considerably similar water consumption profiles. Interestingly,
south america, while predominantly using water for agriculture, actually consumes more water for
domestic purposes than both north america and europe.
The data provided clearly illustrates the difference between the heavily industrialized economies of
north america and europe, and non-industrialized economies such as those of south america,
south east asia and central asia in terms of water consumption.s water usage in six different regions around the world. notably, europe consumes the greatest quantity of water for industrial purposes,
closely
followed by north america. The other four regions use significantly less water for industrial purposes, but use water predominantly for agriculture. both north america and europe consume much less water for use in agriculture than the other four regions. In contrast, in three of those regions, africa, south east asia and central asia, water used for agriculture accounts for more than 80% of total water consumed in each region. africa, south east asia and central asia have considerably similar water consumption profiles. Interestingly, south america, while predominantly using water for agriculture, actually consumes more water for domestic purposes than both north america and europe. The data provided clearly illustrates the difference between the heavily industrialized economies of north america and europe, and non-industrialized economies such as those of south america, south east asia and central asia in terms of water consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 965.302439024 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 331.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86102719033 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02590260313 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.271903323263 0.547539520022 50% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 283.868780488 220% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5891812858 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151091313277 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878472684984 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432275518333 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762263629382 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487035007064 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 61.2550243902 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.