You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The production of ethanol fuel is highly obatined from corn in modern world.The ethanol fuel can be replaced with petrol or diesel in future world.Industries have step up process to obtained ethanol fuel from corn.The diagram given in topic gives description of such process.
The raw corn is stored at large scale in a warehouse.Further corn is sent for milling process where corn granulated in small size .After milling,corn granules are mixed with certain amount of water and cooked for 4 hours at certain temperature.The mixture of corn and water is then fermented for nearly 48 hours.After long process,the mixture contain some amount of liquid and solids.The liquid and solid are separated by certain process,where liquid is further sent for purification stage. The purification step is very important process where purity of desired ethanol fuel is checked.The purification step is carried out for atleast 5 hours.As desired purity of ethanol fuel is obtained, then it stored in drums or in a big storage tanks.The ethanol fuel is delivered as per as demand in market.
Ethanol fuel is succesfully obtained from corn.As in developing when natural fuels will at extinct,it will be replace with ethanol based fuel.The ethanol fuel is enviornment friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30348258706 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03628543321 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.475053263 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.5 112.824112599 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 22.9334400587 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149072590454 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10777852255 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365818957595 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12509214114 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262045445607 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.2329268293 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 61.2550243902 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.06136585366 133% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.