The given diagram depicts how drinks containing carbonation are produced. Overall, there are 5 particular stages in the process of making carbonated beverages from water cleaning to packaging and delivering.
At the beginning of the process, raw water will be cleaned in a large filter, the freshwater then will be softened with chemicals in order to be pumped to stage 2, where softened water is pumped into electric heaters. Afterwards, the water will be cooled in a cooling pipe, and finally finishing stage 2 by mixing with carbon dioxide in an immerse mixing tank. The carbonated water will be mixed again with colour, syrup, and flavour in a larger mixing machine in the next stage.
In the last two stages, carbonated drinks that just finish the process finally will be filtered and filled in bottles or cans and then packed in giant trucks delivering all of these products to supermarkets for consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tage 2 by mixing with carbon dioxide in an immerse mixing tank. The carbonated water will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02631578947 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67296405552 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4134814443 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833320759995 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532220859319 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334291850424 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736286925339 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451827040953 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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