The pie chart illustrates the distribution of tourists to various types of attractions in England reported in a survey in 1999. The table presents the tourists' distribution, particularly in Theme Parks.
Overall, British visitors tended to go to Theme Parks and visit Museums and Galleries more than Wildlife Parks & Zoos or Historic Houses and Monuments. Specifically, more visitors in Theme Parks liked going to Blackpool Pleasure Beach than other areas.
At the first glance at the pie chart, in 1999, Theme Parks and Museums & Galleries in Britain welcomed 38% and 37% respectively of the total visitors. The proportion decreased gradually when it comes to other attractions. Accordingly, 16% of the tourists visited Historic Houses and Monuments, only 9% chose to go to Wildlife Parks and Zoos.
In British Theme Parks in 1999, the highest percentage of the tourists visited Blackpool Pleasure Beach (47%). The figure dropped to 17% and 16% respectively when it comes to Alton Towers and Pleasureland, Southport. The last 20% of visitors were divided equally to Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
... survey in 1999. The table presents the tourists distribution, particularly in Theme Par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40340909091 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9713153331 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9231556721 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161635223103 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674809212753 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862653264334 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114168306755 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857823115637 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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