You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the conpemtorary world most of the people has a different ways to spent their empty times.When some people chooice to make some activities in this time such as reading,doing puzzles or writing somethings.The other chooice to rest of the their mind and be want to be ready and fresh for tomorrows.
First of all,leisure time definition can be different for each person.For someones it's maybe meaning plently empty duration without any duty or the for other ones is could be any time in the day and duration is not vital.It's could be short or long.The brain improvement games could be help to relax and spent quality time.Like doing puzzle or playing jenga brain have to think and create new ideas for finish the game.When individual relaxing as a body also their brain doing exercise with fun.With this way all leisure times became more elegant.
On the other hands,choice to doing something in short or long empty times could be not effective for everytime.It's could be very long,boring and hard work day.And end of the day brain could want to just like a turn off the all process and rest.Doing some kind of activities is not always perfect way for improve the mind.
In conclusion according to my opinion, balance is vital for both sides.Prefer to activities or just resting depend on the how to spent time in day for individuals.Thus, in coherent and slow motion day spent time with game can be help to relaxing.Or in exhausting day just sleep or doing nothing could be positive for brain activities and body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus, as for, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82061068702 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7543953358 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.6619860939 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 315.75 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223826070028 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155384517613 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054020292896 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155384517613 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054020292896 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.