You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following bar chart gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Wri

The bar graph illustrated the comparison between four characteristics with five countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and USA). According to the graph, the highest feature was GNP per head in USA with significant increasing compering with another countries it is value was 13000 dollar approximately per head, however this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indonesia have slight increasing and equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh is the lowest county in this feature. In addition to, calorie supply per person it is can be clearly seen that USA and Egypt have a sharp incensing (3500, 3000 calories per head respectively). Whereas, the Bangladesh was the lowest country, also Bolivia and Indonesia have approximately equal value (2100, 2000 calories per head respectively) In conclusion , the USA is the first one in all feature compering between another countries, and the second is Egypt. There are no significant different in another three countries

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Average: 5.6 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...another countries it is value was 13000 dollar approximately per head, however this fe...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...creasing and equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh is the lowest county in ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 799, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ries per head respectively In conclusion , the USA is the first one in all feature...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46979865772 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02085344821 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8691950683 43.030603864 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547937545985 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316732156229 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261901176648 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547937545985 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.