The diagram reveals the different paths of carbon in the nature. In this report will give a description about them.
It is obvious that the tree absorbs the carbon from he atmosphere due to the photosynthesis process done with the major effect of sunlight to produce organic carbon. Then this tree turned to decay organisms combines with dead organisms and waste products to produce the fossils and fossil fuels which used in vehicles. Where, the plant respiration and animal respiration as well produce carbon gas in CO2 image exhausted to the atmosphere. In addition to the auto and factory emissions produce CO2.
Overall, the balance in carbon cycle is a nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'from the atmosphere'?
Suggestion: from the atmosphere
...bvious that the tree absorbs the carbon from he atmosphere due to the photosynthesis process done ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 560.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 111.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04504504505 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61835343176 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6568016784 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215853725227 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12503490021 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152187079968 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220451355945 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127118977598 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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