The bar graph illustrates the comparison between four characteristics of life quality with five countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and USA). According to the graph, the highest feature is GNP per head in USA with significant increasing compering with other countries, where it is value about 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indonesia have slight increasing and seemed equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh has the lowest level in this feature. In addition to, daily calorie supply per person can be clearly seen in USA and Egypt, where they have a sharp incensing (3500, 3000 calories per head respectively). Whereas, the Bangladesh is the lowest country, Bolivia and Indonesia have approximately equal value (2100, 2000 calories per head respectively).
But, the ware about third aspect of life expectancy at birth is not have a wide known yet, that because all of countries close to zero level of life quality here. Also, the forth aspect of Infant mortality (per 1000 live births) seems very similar to third aspect.
In conclusion, the USA is the first one in all feature compering between another countries, and the second is Egypt. There are no significant different in another three countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ountries, where it is value about 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this fe...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ut 13000 dollar approximately per head. However this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indo...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...g and seemed equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh has the lowest level in ...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...pect of life expectancy at birth is not have a wide known yet, that because all of c...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ths seems very similar to third aspect. In conclusion, the USA is the first one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, whereas, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27722772277 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82459474214 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3444071187 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131669123546 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055383692906 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352859369439 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862041276453 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171538728072 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.