You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pictures depict the layout of the current and upcoming Norbiton Industrial Area.
In general, the town will undergo a dramatic transformation in the future, except for the roundabout at the centre of the town. In addition, a wide range of residential facilities and houses will be built.
Currently, the town is surrounded by a road on the south and a river on the north, which separates it from the farmland. The entrance to the town is from the road at the southern end. From there, it leads to a roundabout, which when turned to the right side, takes you out of the town to a factory. Factories are located around the roundabout and its exit.
In the future plan, the T-intersection of the entrance will be turned into a small roundabout, which will make the means of transport more versatile. Around the old roundabout will be a new medical centre, new shops, and three exits, which will all have houses along one or both sides of them. The old exit from the old roundabout will lead to a school, and three ranges of housing and a playground will be constructed on both sides of it. One new exit will go to a new housing area. The second exit will link the town to the old farmland, where there will be a parallel road alongside the river bank and a new housing area, accessible by a road over the river. Old farmland on the east side of the river will be kept.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, except for, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46062992126 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.545588431 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476377952756 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0373820075 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1538461538 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0699065449507 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309880313619 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328287485925 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605018448992 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299070495073 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.