You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The illustrate show the amount of the sales in different times.Sales are belong to at lunch and dinner times.And the time range is between monday to sunday.Also, table covering week of October 7th - 13th especially.
First of all,according to relevant information in weekday dinner is most popular rather than lunch.When dinner totally approximately 20.000 dollars and lunch just has nearly 15,000 dollars.Also,just in friday dinner is 2 times crowded than the lunch.Dinner is 4,350 and lunch 2,500.It's could be because of people have restricton times for eat something in lunch so they have to be rush and simple for chooice to food,However,in dinner individuals be able to spent plenty time.Thus, when they eating in long hours they could spent more money.
And the other hands, in weekend when dinner is still has a most sales rather than lunch time.Saturday and sunday lunch when restaurant business gained nearly 4,000 dollars but,at dinner time this gaine almost 5,000 dolars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The illustrate show the amount of the sales in differe...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sales
... amount of the sales in different times.Sales are belong to at lunch and dinner times...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
... the sales in different times.Sales are belong to at lunch and dinner times.And the ti...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...are belong to at lunch and dinner times.And the time range is between monday to sun...
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Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... time range is between monday to sunday.Also, table covering week of October 7th - 1...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...r 7th - 13th especially. First of all,according to relevant information in weekday dinn...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...inner is most popular rather than lunch.When dinner totally approximately 20.000 dol...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...nd lunch just has nearly 15,000 dollars.Also,just in friday dinner is 2 times crowde...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , just
...unch just has nearly 15,000 dollars.Also,just in friday dinner is 2 times crowded tha...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riday dinner is 2 times crowded than the lunch.Dinner is 4,350 and lunch 2,500.It...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Dinner
...nner is 2 times crowded than the lunch.Dinner is 4,350 and lunch 2,500.Its could be b...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
... lunch.Dinner is 4,350 and lunch 2,500.Its could be because of people have restric...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... lunch.Dinner is 4,350 and lunch 2,500.Its could be because of people have restric...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , However
...o be rush and simple for chooice to food,However,in dinner individuals be able to spent ...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ndividuals be able to spent plenty time.Thus, when they eating in long hours they co...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...en they eating in long hours they could spent more money. And the other hands, in ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Saturday
...has a most sales rather than lunch time.Saturday and sunday lunch when restaurant busin...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther than lunch time.Saturday and sunday lunch when restaurant business gained ne...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...business gained nearly 4,000 dollars but,at dinner time this gaine almost 5,000 dol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29299363057 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91667792095 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.298683149 43.030603864 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.0 112.824112599 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.3333333333 22.9334400587 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 5.23603664747 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610752313275 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535338706107 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224258680467 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535338706107 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224258680467 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.2329268293 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.