You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The Bar chart illustrates the Exports measured in billions by Someland in year of 2005 and 2015 across the categories Meat products, Dairy products, International tourism. It also forecast the future exports for year 2025. Amount is measured in US dollars.
Exports of Dairy products and International tourism were increased from 2005 to 2015 whereas exports in Meat products were decreased during same period.
Dairy products exported in year 2005 was around &5 billion which was increased sharply to total of $8 billion by year 2015. According to Someland's prediction it will stay near around eight billion dollar by year of 2025.
International tourism behaved similarly in terms of exports as Dairy products. With above $6 billion in 2006, It reached at $7 billion in 2015. Someland is expecting it to climb up more at $8 billion by year 2025.
On the other hand, Meat products were only category which was reduced time by time in terms of its export. Starting with $4 billion in year 2005, exports fell down by almost half billion dollar by 2015. Someland further predicted it to fall down by more half billion and stabilize at around $3 billion by 2025.
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... which was increased sharply to total of billion by year 2015. According to Somel...
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...of exports as Dairy products. With above billion in 2006, It reached at billion ...
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...th above billion in 2006, It reached at billion in 2015. Someland is expecting i...
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...land is expecting it to climb up more at billion by year 2025. On the other ha...
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...nd is expecting it to climb up more at billion by year 2025. On the other hand, Mea...
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...me in terms of its export. Starting with billion in year 2005, exports fell down ...
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...ore half billion and stabilize at around billion by 2025.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260869565217 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.140096618357 0.116061578633 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.048309178744 0.0759168565197 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338164251208 0.0366838410393 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0289855072464 0.0131127313244 221% => OK
Prepositions: 0.193236714976 0.155750635184 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0531400966184 0.0379272487307 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54018124858 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024154589372 0.0210936926555 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00966183574879 0.00175180941692 552% => OK
Determiners: 0.024154589372 0.0948980150116 25% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0048309178744 0.00437022459523 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00966183574879 0.00967000014798 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1157.0 1161.00487805 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.9 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08947368421 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368421052632 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315789473684 0.247514529752 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178947368421 0.171178102325 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0947368421053 0.112407865282 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54018124858 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489473684211 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.1039853018 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2727272727 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6619635568 42.9750493124 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.181818182 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.689975730869 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.48048780488 608% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.8516746411 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.5 2.94281807926 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205699979702 0.418131533498 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150788975919 0.181151798455 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115122320758 0.0850326197045 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631387448403 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182022086167 0.157042692854 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101553562697 0.228904883108 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695355467659 0.108899403657 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306109943973 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962682003892 0.0812612215331 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139319178126 0.316326947829 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832681086824 0.0921553760075 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.