You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The chart provides information about the places that are visited by Three types of people living in Canada: the Canadian born people, New migrants who born in English-speaking countries and others that are born in countries where English is not the first language.
Overall, most of the people are interested in going to cinema halls and very few of any of these people are preferring Theatre shows. The percentages of all three types are fluctuating for all the preferences given.
The cinema is the most famous among all the types of people and from that also Canadian people tops the list by reaching 70% while migrants from English speaking and non- English speaking countries sum up to about 65% and 50% respectively. On the other side, Theatre is the least visited by every type of people and from that only 10% of the non-speaking immigrants are interested which is exactly half the percent of Canada people and here immigrants from English-speaking countries tops the list.
The Zoo is most famous among English-Speaking immigrants ranging to 50% while Canadians themselves are not interested in going there, though they are leading the non- English speaking migrants by about 7%. The immigrants from other non- English speaking countries are most interested in going to Libraries summing up to 55% while people from English-speaking countries and Canada reach to 40% and approx. 37% respectively.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-10 | Sagar Gurung | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-09 | datnguyen1810 | 11 | view |
| 2019-10-27 | Zuna-ira | 61 | view |
| 2019-10-25 | rajshah | 11 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | cindycornelia98 | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...d in going to cinema halls and very few of any of these people are preferring Theatre sho...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...lls and very few of any of these people are preferring Theatre shows. The percentages of all t...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'preferences'' or 'preference's'?
Suggestion: preferences'; preference's
...three types are fluctuating for all the preferences given. The cinema is the most famo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19130434783 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91376045687 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44347826087 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5881832259 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.571428571 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925024791921 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045734427117 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454751191096 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704560784153 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473770335979 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.