You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
The illustrations compare the medium temperatures from January to December and middling length of sunshine in a year in London, New York and Sydney.
A glance at the graph and the table shows that London and New York have the same patterns share similar patterns of average temperature monthly while Sydney has the reverse and the figures of sunshine average similarly in New York and Sydney
Both London and New York have medium temperature under 10C in Jan and Feb. During the next five months, the average temperatures experiences a gradual rise and reach the peak at 23C in the case of London whereas of New York is 29C. From the middle of July to December, there is a steady fall in temperature back to the average of being under 10C. In contrary, medium temperature in Sydney is about 26C in the first two months, then progressively falls and hits the lowest point at 16C in July following by a continuous upward trend to 25C in Dec.
Although London and New York experience the same pattern of climate, the amount of sunshine per year in both city is completely different. In fact, number of hours of sunshine a year in New York is quite equal to this in Sydney, are 2,535 and 2,473, respectively. These is about 2 times higher than in London which is only 1,180.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a continuous upward trend to 25C in Dec. Although London and New York experience ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...ney, are 2,535 and 2,473, respectively. These is about 2 times higher than in London ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, then, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64757709251 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57151020085 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5752036837 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.875 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169618362611 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791676142017 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372088926865 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113395969112 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353622502108 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.