You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates about the how many people go to cinema to watch 4 different film genres in India, Ireland, New Zealand and Japan in the unit of millions views.
Overall, India’s numbers of viewing in all kinds of film are the highest compared to those of others countries, whereas Japan is in the bottom of the table.
Turning to the details, among all types of movie people are likely to choose to watch action movie the most. In India, nearly 8 million people are willing to go to the cinema to watch this kind of film whereas in Ireland, New Zealand and Japan this figure see a slight decrease to 7.6, 7.2, 7.1 in million respectively. Romance and Comedy are also kinds of films that attract a lot of audiences since their total views are 20.3 and 19.9 for funny movies
Thriller films in contrast, do not get much attention from people, especially in Japan where there are only 2.2 million viewers. New Zealand and India follow the same pattern however, this figure in Ireland is almost three times bigger than this in Japan and reach 6.4 million views the highest number among considered countries.
All in all, the total number of watching films in these 4 countries obeys the descending order of the table from India to Japan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68636363636 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29488741869 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7291556693 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.285714286 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119320638456 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599724959891 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316555698303 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682765579884 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232788444573 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.