The stipulated table chart highlights the global market share of the notebook computer in 7different companies for a period of two consecutive years 2006 and 2007. The mentioned categories are Dell, Toshiba and so on.
In 2006, the highest proportion was obtained by HP and continued this trend til the year 2007 by attained a peak(31.4 and 34 percent respectively). In contrast, the least proportion of market share was exhibited by Fujitsu-Siemen in both of these given years(4.8 and 2.3% respectively). Meanwhile, a similar market share(6.2%) was obtained by Toshiba in 2006 and Lenovo in 2007. Despite of high percentage of market share of other companies, it was not so high as HP market demands.
To recapitulate, it is clear that percentage of market demand decreases for most of the companies while very few are obtained a good market trend.
- The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise age limit for the younger drivers and to lower age limit for the aged ones Do you agree 85
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 68
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 84
- Marketing and promotion is the key to a sucessful business. To what extent do you agree 73
- In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them Sometimes the government has to pay for this care Who do you think should pay for this care the government or the family Gi 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98803737375 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1374925437 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25288421816 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115887518112 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747020455972 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171924547665 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432840879947 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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