After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear John,
This is David who had the unfortunate road mishap yesterday when a car hit me at the main thoroughfare. In fact, I am writing this letter to you express my heartfelt appreciation because you provided me with the first aids, and took me to the hospital in the immediate vicinity.
Thankfully the doctor says that my broken leg takes from two to three weeks to heal and this injury is not serious, and cuts, as well as bruises, are minor. If I take good care of them, I will most probably be better soon.
Hence, I would like to seize this opportunity to invite you and your venerable family to my humble home where we can have a luncheon since my wife wishes to meet you personally to show her sincere gratitude. Once again, I am much obliged to you.
I look forward to meeting you.
Yours faithfully,
David
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, so, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53642384106 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50819454323 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728476821192 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2750882571 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264676069257 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109287840506 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830352419065 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146823498522 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732842872249 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.