Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear John,
I am Harry, and a frequent visitor & a registered member of your computing web portal; as it gives enormous knowledge with well defined materials. I am writing this letter to request for my enrollment in the jawa course which was posted today on your website for an exception.
I am currently working as a testing analyst with a renowned firm and having an experience of 3 years, after pursuing my graduation in information technology. my job is really competitive and requires technology updgrades on a daily basis and hence I am really keen to take this course.
I read through the pre-requisite and it seems that it requires an elementary course to be completed prior to taking the same. I would like you to make an exception for me as I already know the basics of computing along with vital handson experience with various projects in same domain. Additionally I see there are other benefits for the paid member of your site which I am already.
I hope you will consider the above points for me and offer me an opportunity to take the jawa course with an expection. Hope to hear from you soon.
Thanks,
your's faithfully
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d having an experience of 3 years, after pursuing my graduation in information te...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... graduation in information technology. my job is really competitive and requires ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ementary course to be completed prior to taking the same. I would like you to mak...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... with various projects in same domain. Additionally I see there are other benefits for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75124378109 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7800148384 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0017390976 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198064842106 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718282822297 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458081989951 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11525516834 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389219754913 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.