Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir/ Madam,
This is Divya, a Grade 10 student from St.Mary's school. This is regarding a request to join the computer course at your institute.
I have seen an advert on the daily newspaper about a computer course offered at your college. Just after I have checked the advertisement, I wanted to join the course. The reason is, I have an affinity towards computers and computer based jobs.
Though I am not into formal training to learn computers, I often get opportunities to work on my elder sibling's system. Since I have been fiddling with computers for about a few months now, I know the grounds of that electronic device well.
So, this is my humble request to enroll me for the course.I would be grateful if you are able to give me a chance to learn it professionally at your prestigious college.
Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
.../ Madam, This is Divya, a Grade 10 student from St.Marys school. This is regarding...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Marys
...is is Divya, a Grade 10 student from St.Marys school. This is regarding a request to ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ble request to enroll me for the course.I would be grateful if you are able to gi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74983562954 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1072171642 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264949961068 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09424322498 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667031950682 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12657029301 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787864873062 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.