Caring For Children is very important for our society. therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Every parent care for their child to their level best. Children are the valuable assets for their parents and they are extremely loved by them. The feeling of parenthood emerges right after the birth of a child. However, it is commonly believed by many that childcare programmes should be compulsorily taken by both mothers and fathers. I completely agree with their belief. This essay will provide supportive statements for this agreement.
To begin with, childcare courses are truly beneficial for the new parents. As new mother has just enter the world of motherhood, she might be inexperienced and unaware of many facts. For example, how to bath a newly born baby, how to change diaper and give a smooth oil massage to baby are few important educational things that childcare training programs could offer. In a survey conducted by Harvard University in 2010, it was found that 95% of the people found it beneficial to join some sort of childcare training program.
Another major reason I agree that childcare training sessions should be taken by parents because there are so many myths and misguiding videos and content on internet and if we follow them without proper knowledge we could harm our child's health badly. For example, a young chinese couple tried to swim their three months old baby but she sipped the chemically infected swimming pool water that affected her lungs and she was found troubled breathing for next five years of her life, quite disheartening! All this happened due to lack of knowledge.
In conclusion,every parent has special feeling and care for their children. Some people have good parenthood qualities by default but it is always beneficial to join childcare training courses as it could help us to be more informative thus mor confident and may also save us from looking tips and tricks from anonymous writers on internet, which could be really detrimental to baby's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: TO_BATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to bathe'?
Suggestion: to bathe
...unaware of many facts. For example, how to bath a newly born baby, how to change diaper...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng videos and content on internet and if we follow them without proper knowledge ...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , every
... to lack of knowledge. In conclusion,every parent has special feeling and care for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04088050314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63682011139 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0543287515 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228121858459 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785651765277 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416558348564 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133499670231 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276040517649 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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