Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college.
My name is smita. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this.
Here, I would like to explain the reason firstly I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting on computer software. Secondly, I feel my presentations are quite simple so to improve my productivity I am interesed in this course. Therefore,I will be able to use advance features of presentations and used it for other purposes.
I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course, then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose any way whichever is more convenient to you.
Looking for a positive reply.
Yours faithfully
Smita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but ...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g this but there is one exception that I have not done elementary certificate of ...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Here, I would like to explain the reason I am an accountant so I do not get time...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e reason I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I k...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cation for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89199944146 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7690867341 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217733699107 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724490160983 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603824762261 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11911951371 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634150938392 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.