Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the advertisement on the college notice board. I am interested in enrolling myself for the intermediate computer course you offer, in the forthcoming term.
I would like to inform you that I do not hold any certification for the foundation level computing program. Although, I am confident with my sound knowledge of the same.
Being a part-time working, international student, I haven't had the opportunity to take up a professional course, although I hold a keen interest in this subject. Over the past four months, I have managed to acquire the basic skills of computing, by tutoring myself through a few helpful classmates and videos available on the internet.
I request you to make a rare exception and accept my application for your level 2 of computing. I assure you that I would be able to keep up with the syllabus and course-work.
I shall be highly obliged if you do choose to make a consideration in my case. You are free to test my ability in this particular arena and then decide, whether I am a deserving candidate.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours Sincerely,
Kathy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you offer, in the forthcoming term. I would like to inform you that I do not ...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the foundation level computing program. Although, I am confident with my sound knowledge...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...-time working, international student, I havent had the opportunity to take up a profes...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p with the syllabus and course-work. I shall be highly obliged if you do choos...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90954773869 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05019744474 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3467720089 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256887393356 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802768685154 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569297452574 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115054346134 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446613110175 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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