bank letter

Essay topics:

bank letter

Dir sir.

I hope this letter finds you in good health, My name is Rivan, and I am one of your new customers, I opened a current account last month with IBAN: AE0158643385456324622.

Furthermore, I have requested a debit card to be delivered to my apartment address which had been written in the application.

However, I received the card shipment last week by courier, But I found the envelope empty when I opened it.

Then, I got a letter from your side, debit and credit cards department asking me to confirm my card has been received. Therefore I decided to write you this mail illustrating the whole situation. Additionally, I concern to get my card as soon as possible to make my banking transactions and to withdraw cash from ATMs as well.

At last, I would like to thank you for all your professional services and looking forward hearing from you.

Thank you.
Yours sincerely.
RIVAN

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e to confirm my card has been received. Therefore I decided to write you this mail illust...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you. Yours sincerely. RIVAN
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, so, then, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85897435897 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05574979958 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1438823876 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103776483789 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281419852831 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430738135909 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445224231187 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566629593416 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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