the bar graph shows the global sales ( in billions of dollors ) of differernt types of digital games between 2000 and 2006
The bar chart provides information about the global sale of 5 types of digital games from 2000 to 2006 .
Overall, the sales of handheld games were the highest. Additionally , the worldwide sales of 3 types ( mobile-phone games , online games , handheld games) increased dramatically , meanwhile , the sales of console games decreased significantly.
In the year 2000 , the sales of console games stood at around $6 billion and the sale of handheld games earned around $ 11 billion . Handheld games were played 2 times more console games . At this time , there is no information relevant to the sales of mobile phone games and online games .
In 2001 , online games started to become popular , with sales reaching around $1 billion . In 2002, worldwide sales of mobile-phone games earned the same as the sales of online games ( approximately $2 billion ) . The sales of mobile phone games and online games increased and earned respectively ( around $ 7 billion and $ 9 billion ) in 2006 . From 2000 to 2003 , the sales of handheld games raised , while the sales of console games fell . In the year 2006 , worldwide sales of handheld games earned at most about % 18 billion . Meanwhile , the sales of console games only earned almost $ 3 billion .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72038787751 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40306122449 0.622605031667 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0547191307 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 2.54639175258 1571% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360506594595 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198478643813 0.0766984524023 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827527095823 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291849086518 0.12726935374 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831893841074 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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