Today different types of robots are developed which are good friends to us and help us both at home and work Is this a positive or negative development

It is true that nowadays there are many different types of robots which are developed as good friends , and they help us very much both at home and work . In my opinion , this development of robots has more positive than negative .
To begin with , There are several reasons for the development of robots , which help us very much both at home and work . The first reason is convenience in housework . Especially for busy people who must work all day in company or office , Robots play important role in their life . For example , A person who go to work from 6 am to 6 pm everyday , so she doesn’t have too much time to do housework including clean the house , wash clothes and water the tree . At that time , Robots can help her address these problems quickly . At work , Robots can help people save time , moreover , they also can help us do many things that we can hardly do . For instance , in industry car , Workers are very difficult to assemble a car quickly without helping of robots , the medium a car will be completed in 3 months by workers but if they use robots for this work , a car will be completed only in 2 months .
At the same time , I believe that robots make people are lazier and passive . Currently , many people become busier with their work at company and they lose sense of family , because they think that robots helped them do all things in house , therefore , they don’t care and have responsibility with housework . Additionally , I am very worrying about the problem that robots are increasing in number . It can make workers in industries who have unemployment risks . The reason for this is that many workers will be replaced by Robots that brings high effective work in the future .
For the reasons mentioned above , I believe that Robots are as good friends with human ,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63291139241 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45149569587 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496835443038 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5149280993 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365364305841 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138300323335 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158156357905 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284573466103 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225511243988 0.056905535591 396% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.