The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table show the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar graph illustrates how much export profit in five kinds of products in each of the year between 2015 and 2016 while the table gives information about the difference of proportion of each product in the similar period.
Overall, it is clear that the figure for petroleum products and engineered goods exported were the most popular and the changing valuation of textiles was largest.
To begin, approximately 60 $ billions of petroleum product was exported, the highest-earning in the period of two years from 2015 to 2016. The figure for engineered goods exported in 2016 was over about 60 $billions, this was higher than the value in 2015. Similarly, the number of textiles exported, with 30 and 20 $ billions respectively.
Looking at the table in more detail, from 2015 to 2016, the highest increase in the proportion in value was textiles, with 15.24%. The proportion increase in values of petroleum products, engineered goods, and Agriculture products exported were 3%, 8.5%, and 5.18% respectively. Gems and jewellery experienced a downward trend in the value of export earning, with 5.18%.
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- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table show the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of each product in the similar period. Overall, it is clear that the figure for...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...was largest. To begin, approximately 60 $ billions of petroleum product was expor...
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Suggestion: ,
...goods exported in 2016 was over about 60 , this was higher than the value in 2015....
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...umber of textiles exported, with 30 and 20 $ billions respectively. Looking at th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22033898305 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88212884283 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2048575403 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247955871409 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113686293416 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510395165071 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151003633643 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503728678054 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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