The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts show share of home cooking in contrast with money that spent on outdoor eating during a three decades span. And also, chart illustrates numbers of meals that consumed in the fast foods and the sit-down restaurants between 1970 and 2000.
In general, the most striking information about pie charts is the share of outdoor meals outlays that reached to half in 2000, and also, after 1980 the demand for fast foods experienced dramatic rise.
By looking at pie charts during time, the proportion of home cooking was 90% that is huge, and then after one decade it reached to 85%. but after 1980, home cooking dropped to 65 percent, and finally, it reached the same percentage of money spent on restaurant meals.
By comparing fast foods and sit-down restaurants, before 1980 , sit-down restaurant was more popular than fast foods. But after 1980, fast foods went up sharply and acquire near 90 meals per year in 2000.in addition, sit-down restaurants also increased steadily and hit a little under 50 meals per year in 2000.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- weigh assessment of inhabitants of Newtown 2010 57
- The chart below shows the different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999 84
- The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday 67
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...hen after one decade it reached to 85%. but after 1980, home cooking dropped to 65 ...
^^^
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ds and sit-down restaurants, before 1980 , sit-down restaurant was more popular th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, so, then, in addition, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38195735347 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.0929771706 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301274436578 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149334403402 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901646581309 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183485924952 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891624540125 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...hen after one decade it reached to 85%. but after 1980, home cooking dropped to 65 ...
^^^
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ds and sit-down restaurants, before 1980 , sit-down restaurant was more popular th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, so, then, in addition, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38195735347 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.0929771706 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301274436578 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149334403402 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901646581309 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183485924952 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891624540125 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.