A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.- Suggest some places to visit and

Dear Sunaina,

Hope you are well so as your family.

It is an absolute pleasure to be able to meet you. I'm really excited because we are catching up after a long time. It looks like just yesterday we were sitting in a classroom, but today we are grown and settled in different parts of the world!. Since you are landing on March, let me know the duration of your visit.

Once you are done with "family time" , we can hang out. I hope to whisk you to seashore by the end of March. Do let me know if it sounds good and your availability. Our Goa beaches are the best and we can bond over some outdoor activities and adventure sports if you are not too faint hearted. You love snorkelling, scuba diving and I prefer water sports hence this suggestion.

You need to wait until you lay your hands on the mock tails, they are drool worthy. We can also pray in some of these churches, they are so tranquil.

Let me know if you have any other views.

Yours affectionately
Sabitha

Votes
Average: 5.2 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...solute pleasure to be able to meet you. Im really excited because we are catching ...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ou are done with 'family time' , we can hang out. I hope to whisk you to...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47282608696 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43059389978 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1424945589 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7857142857 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210840958511 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813794071367 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633317280601 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136963679225 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055717861127 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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