You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Mr/Ms. Manager,
Hope you are doing good!
I lost my file in your hotel yesterday. I was waiting at the reception for your staff. I recall holding an official file, since it took a few minutes for being shown the way, I remember keeping the file on the desk in the guest area. Once the waiter arrived , I went inside to dine.
After a heavy dinner, I paid the bills and forget to retrieve my file.Unfortunately, I walked past the entrance but did not spot it there as well. After reaching home , I noticed that the file was no longer in my possession. So , I immediately searched in the car, its trunk however to my dismay, could not find any trace of it.
I suppose your facility managers must have kept it away. this file has some important budget forecasts relating to my company,it was a top priority job that I was working on and documented in the file
Is it possible to check and confirm if this file can be located?
Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely
Sabitha Sriram
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-11 | taytaytay | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-07 | Kubraguran | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-02 | PALAK AHUJA | 87 | view |
| 2019-12-19 | harsha.annapureddy@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-19 | harsha.annapureddy@gmail.com | 56 | view |
- the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. 56
- Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or a sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or problems? 84
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. 61
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk Cloth. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aiting at the reception for your staff. I recall holding an official file, since ...
^
Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the guest area. Once the waiter arrived , I went inside to dine. After a heavy...
^^
Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...he bills and forget to retrieve my file.Unfortunately, I walked past the entrance but did not...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot it there as well. After reaching home , I noticed that the file was no longer i...
^^
Line 8, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... file was no longer in my possession. So , I immediately searched in the car, its ...
^^
Line 10, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...cility managers must have kept it away. this file has some important budget forecast...
^^^^
Line 10, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... budget forecasts relating to my company,it was a top priority job that I was worki...
^^^
Line 22, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ours sincerely Sabitha Sriram
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70555555556 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59252618756 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0305406685 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0743076405004 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264271475823 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047615136494 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506185791008 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733971186282 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.