In today's time education is become very expensive and it is not easy to sustain on just pocket money. Therefore, many students opt for part-time jobs during the weekends or take up evening jobs to support their expenses. However, does this approach hamper their studies or benefit them? In my opinion, the pros outweigh the cons, and we shall discuss the same in this essay.
Firstly, the major drawback of having a job is, it does not leave you with enough time focus on your studies. Since, you spend most of the day in school and rest of the time working, it is difficult to squeeze in time for educational commitments. Secondly, you may miss out on your social life as by the the end of the day you will be too tired to attend any function, thus, hampering your relationship with your family and friends.
However, managing a job and studies has some advantages. Mainly, it makes you responsible along with being good at multi-tasking. In addition, to making you financially independent and ready for the job market. For instance, once you complete your education, your part time job will add weight to your resume. Currently, employers are looking to hire students who along with a good curricular background also has some job exposure. Moreover, since you started earning at a young age you know the value of money and are able to control your lifestyle. Any unnecessary expenditure can be curbed and the same can be spent on essentials.
Keeping all the over points in mind I believe, it is better to undertake a job while studying. Although, your parents will support you and ensure you have a comfortable life, it is better to undertake your financial responsibility from an early age as it will give you a sense of pride and achievement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... may miss out on your social life as by the the end of the day you will be too tired to...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... may miss out on your social life as by the the end of the day you will be too tired to...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... once you complete your education, your part time job will add weight to your resume. Cur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7606557377 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69870125134 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5118158751 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21505916262 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753840687224 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509905153006 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127591694418 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363176628954 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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