A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague.
In your letter, you should say:
what the presentation was about,
why the presentation was important
how the book helped you.
Dear Mr. Smith,
Last week I have been asked to give a presentation on 'Modern business Architecture' to the senior associates of our organization which was the most challenging task for me. However, the book you lend played a significant role in delivering the presentation. Therefore, I am writing this letter to thank you profusely for all your help and support.
To begin with, our company is trying to up-scale the skills of all the employees to match the current requirements of the project. Thus, this seminar was not only planned to analyze the latest business architectures but also to decide which one is suitable to adopt.
This presentation was immensely important for me as this was a golden opportunity for me to showcase my talent and climb up the ladder of the organizational hierarchy. Hence, I needed to have well-versed knowledge of the topic for which this book has helped me a lot.
Also, a special thanks to you as you were the one who has suggested me to collect the information from the book ' Business Architecture volume 5'. Furthermore, when it was not available in the library you allow me to borrow it from your personal collection. This book helped me to collect the required vocabulary for the subject which made me sound professional throughout the presentation.
I could not imagine how miserable my situation would be without your help. Thanks a ton!
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to collect the information from the book Business Architecture volume 5. Furtherm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04641350211 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01287459385 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.404895193 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342781471426 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128042513761 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755790963613 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173020412496 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115155176428 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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