A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague.
In your letter, you should say:
what the presentation was about,
why the presentation was important
how the book helped you.
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the book that you gave me last month.
Last week, I had a presentation in my department about how to develop manager software. The book that you gave me had a lot of things which supports my software. Firstly, I took some content for the main ideas that I will develop, such as how to arrange jobs, how to filter jobs, how to set priority jobs, and so on. The book gave me all the results of this software which I think about every all week. Secondly, for getting up my position in the company, this presentation is really important to me. However, I had a successful presentation because with your book I have a lot of ideas that make me get up my work.
In conclusion, I would like to invite you to a restaurant near my house to thank you. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Tom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, really, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35582822086 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46833230812 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0251301177 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299623801112 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119645247836 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918021102548 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245816243325 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772532927305 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.