Dear Sir,
I am an employee of your cafe and I am writing with regards to the planning of shutting down this place, which is quite lamentable. Since, I am working here from a long time; I believe that after doing some amendments, this place will become profitable as well as useful to everyone again.
To embark upon, the biggest problem is a quality of food as it is not up to the mark and also, the prices of some of the items here are too much as compared to the other restaurants outside. In addition, the variety is less too, for example only two dishes are served here at the time of lunch and dinner and same goes with the snacks offered at the time of brunch. Therefore, people prefer to eat outside.
However, I think if we focus on changing the menu and making our food more savoury then definitely staff members will get attracted to the cafeteria food as it is a lot more feasible for them to eat here.
In light of this, I request you to reconsider your decision and to take appropriate measures to resolve this issue. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours' faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... up to the mark and also, the prices of some of the items here are too much as compared to ...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...e menu and making our food more savoury then definitely staff members will get attra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49268292683 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39206501059 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0710912278 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 4.34317383033 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876590020287 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311154983929 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247548840826 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514350133841 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211306854442 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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