Describing the chart shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The chart release the information about males and females leisure time of different employment status between 1998 and 1999.
In general, women enjoyed their leisure of all employment status, included employed full time and part time, unemployed, retired and housewives statement while men had leisure time of employed full time, unemployed and retired status.
Besides, both men and women had the most of leisure time of unemployed as many as retire status that is about 80 hours of men and 70 hours of women. The females leisure time of housewives were about 50 hours and employed full time status enjoyed approximately 40 hours. Finally, employed full time status enjoyed the less time that were just 50 hours that were just 50 hours by men and less than 40 hours by women.
In summary, there were different between men and women from enjoying the leisure time. And women were trend distributed their leisure time of vary employment status than men.
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- The first chart shows the result of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100000 people asking travelled abroad and why they travelled the period 1994-1998. The second chart shows their destination over the same period. 73
- Describing the chart shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'releases'.
Suggestion: releases
The chart release the information about males and females...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ll employment status, included employed full time and part time, unemployed, retired and ...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...status, included employed full time and part time, unemployed, retired and housewives sta...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... while men had leisure time of employed full time, unemployed and retired status. Beside...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ewives were about 50 hours and employed full time status enjoyed approximately 40 hours. ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...proximately 40 hours. Finally, employed full time status enjoyed the less time that were ...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...joying the leisure time. And women were trend distributed their leisure time of vary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, while, in general, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0251572327 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39483113606 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 127.690721649 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433962264151 0.622605031667 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4472489904 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501676552225 0.216113520407 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.306281148268 0.0766984524023 399% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648491815756 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367782206819 0.12726935374 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620971692139 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.