The pictorial presentations enlists the different stages in which the frozen meat pies are manufactured and dispatched for sale.
On scanning the first diagram, it is quite apparent that first the refrigerated meat is delivered within the time period of 2 weeks or even May be less to defrost. Then, further the pieces of this defrosted beef is placed on the moving belt, on which further modifications are done. Firstly, the ingredients like salt and pepper are added in beef to enhance its taste. Afterwards, the pieces are made to pass through the oven, over where it become somewhat softer. Then, the further stage comes where around 4 employees removes the fat and cut these beef into smaller pieces and however, if some beef pieces are not upto that good quality, then they are discarded. After that comes the inspection phase, where an expert monitors the quality of meat particles. Furthermore, again 2 employees are posted whose job are to put these meat into containers of microwaveable plastic quality.
Probing ahead, some vegetables like peas and carrot and a prepared gravy is put on the meat layer by layer to make it more delicious. Further, a layer of potato is also applied on meat, which are likewise manufactured meat, firstly they are deliver within 2 months. Then are stored, cleaned up, peeled and cut into slices which are simultaneously boiled and chilled and finally stored. After, putting the layer of these stores potatoes, meat is then wrapped, freezes and finally they are ready to dispatch into market for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'enlist'.
Suggestion: enlist
The pictorial presentations enlists the different stages in which the froze...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...to pass through the oven, over where it become somewhat softer. Then, the further stag...
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Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where around 4 employees removes the fat and cut these beef into smaller pieces a...
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Line 2, column 824, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this meat' or 'these meats'?
Suggestion: this meat; these meats
...ployees are posted whose job are to put these meat into containers of microwaveable plasti...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'delivered'.
Suggestion: delivered
...ise manufactured meat, firstly they are deliver within 2 months. Then are stored, clean...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96525096525 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58324531034 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1510088278 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0481292819127 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195058054578 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195770488251 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412746289463 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178310608283 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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