The given pictorial describes the procedure of making frozen fish pies.
Overall, it can be seen that, fish pie starts from cleaning the potatoes and last at ready to dispatch.
It is crystal clear that, a fish pie contains four ingredient peas, sauce, fish and potato in the microwaveable container. However, the process of producing line start from delivery of potatoes one month ago. After that, potatoes being cleaned and peeled then cut it into the slices. Following this, potatoes slices put into hot water for boiling and being chilled. Next process is packing of slices to the store. After reaching at store it separated into two parts.
In one part, slices put into the bowl and prepared with sauce and peas. After there, inspection process start where skins and bones removed then put it into in an oven for steam. After that, fresh salmon is ready for served with salt and lemon juice. In another part, a man wrap the slices and then these packages put it into the freezer. After 12 hour slices are ready for dispatch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cess is packing of slices to the store. After reaching at store it separated into two...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. After that, fresh salmon is ready for served with salt and lemon juice. In ano...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s put it into the freezer. After 12 hour slices are ready for dispatch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80446927374 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19529616215 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.118026598 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.1538461538 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596679214754 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024291018438 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424595423719 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606510939542 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460753251513 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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