The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature. and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how black tea is produced for.
Overall, it can be seen that the traditional way is used for loose tea, while modern machinery is ideal for tea bags. There are five steps in each process.
The first stage is picking fresh tea leaves, concluding only the bud and two top leaves for high quality. After that, the leaves are put into the withering chamber, where are passed through on rack by air to get rid of approximately 60 percent moisture. Then, factories use either the traditional method to make loose tea by rolling leaves flat and broken or modern way to create tea bags when the leaves are cut, torn and curled. In the first process, enzymes are removed from leaves, whereas the other is quicker to make smaller granular pieces.
At the next stage, rolled leaves with the mixture of enzymes and air are spread on the tiles of the cement, called oxidation stage. This step can change the color of leaves. Finally, when the tea is fired or dried in the oven or in hot air dryers to get rid of 97 percent moisture, flavour and aroma of it are released.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., flavour and aroma of it are released.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54591836735 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24403392463 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4212505332 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16078401813 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675371984468 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602079555215 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120075693462 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691881621832 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., flavour and aroma of it are released.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54591836735 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24403392463 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4212505332 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16078401813 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675371984468 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602079555215 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120075693462 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691881621832 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.