During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a
chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should
contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• remind him when and where you met
• tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• say why you thínk you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Jafari
This is Pourya Mirzaei. I am wondering if you still know me I am a person who you spoke with about a job vacancy in your restaurants. this letter is written in reply to your helpful suggestions.
Not until a week ago did we speak together on a plane to Istanbul about your restaurant. we spoke about the company's goals and plans which were highly valued. we had a lot of brainstorming throughout the subject and at the end of the day, you offered me to contact you for more information.
As we had talked about my interest I am keen on cooking. actually, I have spent all my energy in this job since I was 20; therefore, I can work as a cook in a restaurant; however, I think I might be needed more experience to work as a chef because I have to learn about different kinds of dishes.
Having said about my desire to take this position, I have an academic degree in cooking and hold special qualifications in both Italian and Iranian dishes. I expertise in seafood as well thus I could be employed in any place you wish for. once again thank you for your recommendation. I'm looking forward to your reply
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...bout a job vacancy in your restaurants. this letter is written in reply to your help...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...lane to Istanbul about your restaurant. we spoke about the companys goals and plan...
^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...als and plans which were highly valued. we had a lot of brainstorming throughout t...
^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me to contact you for more information. As we had talked about my interest I am ke...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...about my interest I am keen on cooking. actually, I have spent all my energy in this job...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
... be employed in any place you wish for. once again thank you for your recommendation...
^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...gain thank you for your recommendation. Im looking forward to your reply
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72521192669 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9105047909 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214095308993 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771450540394 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516115342616 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133282187179 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641532284743 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.