Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most
people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of
greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people, especially youngers, believe that at adult ages, they would have a happier life from their current status. On the opposite side, some adults admit that teenage years were the best time of their life. In my opinion, adults would experience more enjoyable moments than teenagers.
For some individuals, teenage years might be the best time of their life. Although they might not have enough money, they had lots of friends, which gave them the opportunity to accumulate money on holding parties or went on an economical holiday together without any common worries,they are facing these days. But these fun activities are not the only criteria of being happy.
Despite assuming the heavy responsibility, adults will have happier moments from their prior ages. Some people had been working hard since early 20s, so at the age of 30 and above, they will be in comfort zoon. Consequently, they will earn more money to spend on preferable hobbies. For example, they travel almost every desired place or buy as many clothes as they want and these will bring joy in their life. Besides, this period is longer than teenage years, so they will be in touch with happiness stimulate more often. A Person can wait for several good events to come. For example, getting a high-paid job, falling in love with someone, and having babies are the most enjoyable moments in his life.
In conclusion, teenagers have a cheerful spirit due to excess energy and emotional feelings that they frequently experience. But these feelings are temporary, and if they strive for a better future, under any circumstances, they will have a more splore and take action for even more satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...iday together without any common worries,they are facing these days. But these fun ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06785714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5147498557 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0995934941 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158255103444 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062669737801 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497947362487 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105037386123 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450149812452 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.