Dear Mr. John Smith
I hope you remember me as I occupied your next seat during flight number AT654 from Toronto to New York. We had an interesting conversation over your business and I am writing this letter to find out if you have job vacancies at one of your branches in Toronto.
Although I am able to work at any position available in the kitchen, I would prefer to be employed as a chef assistant due to the provision of the opportunity of working under supervision of renowned chefs who work at your restaurants.
This position will teach me a myriad of cookery basics which I will be benefiting from in near future, sine I am going to take up a class in a culinary school and planning to be a professional chef one day as I told you about in our time together. Moreover, I would be more useful in the kitchen not only because of my enthusiasm but also as a result of my experience of working in a famous dinning place in Toronto for three years.
I look forward to hearing from you soon through email or phone provided on my curriculum vitae.
Yours sincerely,
X Y
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this? 89
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letterr 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44278606965 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68703699595 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6680364326 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168889798128 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768700404568 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473127259925 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943613512471 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060134393242 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.