Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Jack Reacher and I had the pleasure of having been your co-passenger during our flight from London to New York. I write to you to remind you of your mention of a vacancy at one of your restaurants in London which you thought i might be suitable for.
Two weeks ago, on the flight from London to New York. I was seated next to you. I recall your company having made the long journey enjoyable, as one topic of our conversation cascaded interestingly into the next. During our conversation you had mentioned a possible vacancy at your newly inaugarated restaurant at London. I remember you had said that the job involved managing restaurant operations.
I would like to request your attention towards considering me for the vacancy as Restaurant Operations Manager. I believe that i would be the ideal candidate for this position as i have the right mix of personality and professional experience. I have over 8 years of experience in operations in the hospitality industry and an MBA in Hospitality Management.
Furthermore, I am known to have an eye for detail and not only get along with people but also am known to be organized and punctual, I believe these traits are crucial to the job, thus making me the perfect fit for it.
I look forward to hearing from you and hope for a favorable response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jack Reacher
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...restaurants in London which you thought i might be suitable for. Two weeks ago...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cancy as Restaurant Operations Manager. I believe that i would be the ideal candi...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rant Operations Manager. I believe that i would be the ideal candidate for this p...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ersonality and professional experience. I have over 8 years of experience in oper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, thus, well, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7375 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82508296338 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7026361556 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2142857143 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19981374307 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776691801864 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689595864428 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106473785478 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878231539028 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.