Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good health but I am writing to inform you woefully that I will not be able to attend the theatre show with you next week because of a pivotal piece of work.
The problem is that recently my boss told me that I have to go Delhi on that same day to meet an extremely important client to close a deal which will indeed be quite profitable for our company. In fact, if I get success in persuading him to do to business with us than my promotion will be inevitable. As, you are aware that I had been waiting for such an opportunity since long, it is just not possible for me to postpone me. Also, all my peers are very eager to grab this chance too.
Although, I am certain that you will not only comprehend this situation but will also encourage me to do it at the first place. However, I am feeling bad to cancel the plan hence, here is an advice for you. You must be familiar with my other close friend Rosh as you have met him before as well. He is fond of theatre and would love to accompany you. Though, I have not asked him yet but I can assure you that you will enjoy a lot with him so please accept my proposal.
I apologise for the trouble and awaiting your prompt reply.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...peers are very eager to grab this chance too. Although, I am certain that you...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...g bad to cancel the plan hence, here is an advice for you. You must be familiar with my o...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14285714286 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18184550612 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0963484829 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265031585954 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104703351464 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691309524001 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153866960948 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732965906814 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.