Essay topics:
The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates data about the percentage of hired people in the UK economy, namely public sector, private sector and self-employed, over a decade period from 2000 to 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the employment rate in the private sector witnessed a significant downward trend, while there were upward trends in the public and self-employed sector over the period in question.
Looking at the details, as regards the private sector, the percentage started at under 50% in 2000. After that, there was a remarkable decline to approximately 8% in 2002, before levelling off in the following year. At this point, the employment rate halved in the period between 2003 and 2009 and then the figure hit the trough of 20% in the last year.
With respect to the self-employed sector, the proportion remained stable over the first three years. Despite a considerable decrease from nearly 38% in 2003 to just under 50% in 2005, the figure then reduced gradually by 5% in 2006. Subsequently, there was a steady increase, finishing at well over 50%. Regarding the self-employed sector, the trend was similar. The employment rate climbed slightly between 2000 and 2002, before dropping to the same rate in the beginning. Following this, there was a substantial rise to 30% in the final year.
- The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5 73
- Essay topics The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK 2000 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 85
- Essay topics The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK 2000 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, then, well, while, as regards, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04128440367 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76527900018 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8592979127 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173667267648 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664450355501 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575064560011 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117555194958 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323573240798 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, then, well, while, as regards, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04128440367 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76527900018 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8592979127 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173667267648 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664450355501 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575064560011 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117555194958 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323573240798 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.