Essay topics: You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you left you wallet there. Write a letter to your fiend. In your letter
thank your fiend for being the host
explain that you left your wallet in their house.
give them instructions on how to send it back you you
Hi Ritu,
I trust this letter discovers you in the pink of wellbeing and great soul. My trip back home was great and I arrived back securely yesterday.
I need to thank you and your folks for being a phenomenal host during my stay in your home. I truly had a decent time and felt agreeable in an obscure city. Additionally, I altogether delighted in the suppers prepared by your mom. They were tasty and I can't hold on to attempt the plans she imparted to me.
In any case, when I arrived at home, I understood that I have overlooked my wallet in the bureau. It contains some significant solicitations which I would require later. I should submit few of them for authority purposes.
At whatever point you get time this week, I would demand you to please send it to my office address through messenger. I would be exceptionally thankful to you and I trust you will pardon me for my awkwardness. This is first time in my life that I neglected to convey my wallet. Possibly, age is making up for lost time with me.
Plan to see you again soon in my city next time. If it's not too much trouble allow me to have you during next Christmas get-aways. We will go for some experience outing and welcome John also.
Regards,
RS
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- Essay topics: You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you left you wallet there. Write a letter to your fiend. In your letterthank your fiend for being the hostexplain that you left your wallet in their house.g 84
- Essay topics: You have spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you left you wallet there. Write a letter to your fiend. In your letterthank your fiend for being the hostexplain that you left your wallet in their house.g 73
- Dear Ritu,I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health and good spirit. My flight back home was good and I landed back safely yesterday.I would like to express my gratitude towards you and your family for being a great host during my stay in your ho 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ared by your mom. They were tasty and I cant hold on to attempt the plans she impart...
^^^^
Line 21, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ee you again soon in my city next time. If its not too much trouble allow me to ha...
^^
Line 21, column 187, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...some experience outing and welcome John also. Regards, RS
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5154185022 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58698729231 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638766519824 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1123328722 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0625 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305890867408 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862708039094 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939692254411 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155333212663 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626409891825 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.