DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am writing to you to request to allow for enrollment in a training course which shall prove to be beneficial for me and in turn help the organization to have a trained employee.
I came across a training course advertisement in the daily newspaper of June 3, 2018. The training course is on “Sexual Harassment – Consequences at workplace” and will be held from June 19 – June 25, 2018 at Amby theatre. It is a growing problem in all the major companies across the world and the issue of sexual harassment is not dealt with properly. The laws are changing and the compliance is to be done as per the recent circular received. However, we do not have any Committee for redressing of the issues.
Thus, I request that the company should allow me to enroll which will help the company to form a committee and comply with the latest notification. I am willing to bear the expenses of the course. However, the said workshop is only for multinational employees.
I hope you will consider my request and allow me to enroll in the said course and issue the necessary paperwork.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ganization to have a trained employee. I came across a training course advertis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76616915423 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88697855587 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0036261097 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280771947838 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911061161135 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675910961394 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1622398346 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778530930156 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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