Dear Sir/Madam,
I am constrained to write to you to know about the outcome of the recent interview for which I had appeared in your company in the last week of August 2019. Allow me to elaborate.
I was fortunate enough to have been shortlisted for the initial screening and later was intimated that my presence has been requested for the purposes of an interview for the post of Provincial Manager – Fraud & Legal Compliance. Moreover, I was ecstatic on the call.
Further, I was really happy with the overall interview round and the board seemed very impressed with my credentials. However, the chair of the board has sought some time and wanted to speak to me privately. I was shrieking in my head thinking I must have done something wrong. However, to my surprise, the person came and started discussing the pay package with me and asked me to wait for a call.
As a result, to date, I have been waiting keenly on the outcome of the said interview. Also, I had appeared for an interview in another company and they have offered me a position. I am in a dilemma and contemplating what to do. As such, I wanted to know the outcome of the interview.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, moreover, really, so, as for, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62895927602 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68921936995 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547511312217 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1660667151 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185444081269 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578850613301 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524439833568 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108703199184 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555931340535 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.