A FRIEND FROM ABROAD IS VISITING YOUR COUNTRY NEXT MONTH. SHE IS PLANNING TO STAY WITH YOU, BUT YOU CANNOT ACCOMMODATE HER. WRITE A LETTER TO HER
TELL HER THE REASON
APOLOGISE
MAKE ALTERMATIVE ARRANGEMENTS
DEAR AMAR,
WHAT CAN I SAY , EXCEPT I AM SORRY THAT I CANNOT ACCOMMODATE YOU IN MY FLAT NEXT MONTH.ACTUALLY , YESTERDAY WE CAME TO KNOW THAT ONE OF MY ROOMMATE’S FATHER HAS DETECTED CANCER IN HIS LUNGS AND NEEDED IMMEDIATE SURGERY.
AND NEXT MONTH THEY GOT THE APPOINTMENT FOR SURGERY. AFTER SURGERY THEY HAVE A PLAN TO STAY WITH US IN OUR FLAT FOR 9-10 DAYS. UNDER THOES CIRCUMSTANCES I CAN’T STAY WITH YOU. I AM REALLY FEEL GUILTY FOR THIS , AFTERALL YOU ARE COME AFTER 4 YEARS AND I HAVE PLANNED EVERY THING WITH YOU. I WAS HAPPY THAT WE WOULD STAY TOGETHER AND ENJOY ALOT BUT NOTHING IS IN MY HAND.
BUT THE ONLY THING I CAN DO FOR YOU IS TO PROVIDE ACCOMODATION IN THE NEAR BY HOTEL NAMED HILLS PARK WHICH IS HARDLY 1 KM BY FOOT FROM MY FLAT. I WILL JOIN THERE AND ACCOMPANY YOU.BELIEVE ME I WILL NEVER FEEL YOU BORING AND LONELY.
I HOPE YOU BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY HOW SORRY I AM.
YOUR LOVINGLY,
ANCHAL
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| 2020-09-19 | anchal saini | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
DEAR AMAR, WHAT CAN I SAY , EXCEPT I AM SORRY THAT I CANNOT ACCOMMO...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ODATE YOU IN MY FLAT NEXT MONTH.ACTUALLY , YESTERDAY WE CAME TO KNOW THAT ONE OF M...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...TH YOU. I AM REALLY FEEL GUILTY FOR THIS , AFTERALL YOU ARE COME AFTER 4 YEARS AND...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...YOU. I AM REALLY FEEL GUILTY FOR THIS , AFTERALL YOU ARE COME AFTER 4 YEARS AND I HAVE P...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: Nearby
...R YOU IS TO PROVIDE ACCOMODATION IN THE NEAR BY HOTEL NAMED HILLS PARK WHICH IS HARDLY ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25142857143 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45656626995 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8878225536 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20355101877 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829632223158 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359739746476 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110412256522 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408567321324 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.