Dear srikrupa,
Hello! How are you doing? I hope you are great. Thanks a lot for agreeing to take care of my house and Browny.
As I have mentioned earlier, I'm visiting Paris next week to meet my parents. I have planned to stay there for fortnight. I thought it would be better to give details of the things to be done while I'm away. As you know that Browny is very silent and cute puppy one would wish for. She won't bother you much unless you feed her from time to time. Give her handfull of food in a dish twice a day.
I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor plants needs to be watered once in two days whereas outdoor plants needs water daily. Besides, don't forget to check my mails in the mailbox. In case of emergency you can text me either on WhatsApp or Instagram.
I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Warm wishes,
Shravani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear srikrupa, Hello! How are you doing? I hope you are...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d Browny. As I have mentioned earlier, Im visiting Paris next week to meet my par...
^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... details of the things to be done while Im away. As you know that Browny is very s...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'need'.
Suggestion: need
...water my plants, too. The indoor plants needs to be watered once in two days whereas ...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...door plants needs water daily. Besides, dont forget to check my mails in the mailbox...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, whereas, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29696969697 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09153262552 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9140038146 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.2666666667 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13154717332 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429115885083 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335747535472 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835637980529 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456704427168 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.