You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet However you could not make it Write a letter to your friend In your letter you should Express your apology Why you could not meet Making an arrangement to meet him

Dear Pooja,

I'm extremely sorry to cancel our meeting at last moment on my privious visit to your place. I know that we have been waiting soo long to see each other. I'm feeling guilty that I couldn't make it happen and I hope you'll understand the situation I was in.

I'd like to tell you the reason, as you already knew that my main purpose to my trip is business meeting. I scheduled my day accordingly and then I informed you the place and time to meet me. Unfortunately, the meeting was extended for another 2 hours. I was hoping to outline my business idea but to my surprise he was very much interested to settle the deal on the same day. So I got stuck with my job and didn't find time to see you. I felt devastated on that day for breaking my promise.

I have an exciting news! I'm hosting a party next week and I want you to come before two days so that we can spend some quality time with each other. I hope you'll forgive me and come to my place.

I can't wait to see you next week.

Lots of love,
Sarah

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... day for breaking my promise. I have an exciting news! Im hosting a party next week and I wan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24713150483 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1079905595 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5384615385 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19230402915 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667942547722 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06354791084 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113825366839 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313773727556 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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