Dear Abhishek,
I hope you are doing well. It's been a long time and we haven't seen each other. However, I was extremely delightful to hear that you are coming to Toronto for your future endavors.
To be honest, it is the best decision that you choose to stay in Toronto because the interesting factor of the city is that you'll have majority of employment opportunities in the field you are working as a professional in India for almost half a decade. Plus, we will help to get a rental space and helping you to prepare a list of things needs to be packed before flying from India.
As you know, Toronto is the one of finest cities in Canada. You'll won't have any problems to communicate through public means of transports like buses, cabs and metros. They are all available 24/7, but in the midnight metros are running every half-hour from one station to another.
Further, you would curious to know that how will I make more friends. But, you do not need to care about it because I found our childhood friends Shivam, Aishwarya, Rohan, and many other living in the city. I felt nostalgic while seeing our friends here in Toronto, and the best part is that we are living those old days of our childhood after coming back from work everyday by going out for different activities like clubbing, restaurants, gyming, and playing cricket.
I wish you would be here now but please update the finalize dates when you'll be coming to Canada.
I can't wait to see you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...doing well. Its been a long time and we havent seen each other. However, I was extreme...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... interesting factor of the city is that youll have majority of employment opportuniti...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the finest'.
Suggestion: of the finest
...ia. As you know, Toronto is the one of finest cities in Canada. Youll wont have any p...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
... is the one of finest cities in Canada. Youll wont have any problems to communicate t...
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Line 11, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...you would be here now but please update the finalize dates when youll be coming to Canada. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...t please update the finalize dates when youll be coming to Canada. I cant wait to ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ates when youll be coming to Canada. I cant wait to see you soon. Warm rega...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...es when youll be coming to Canada. I cant wait to see you soon. Warm regards, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65543071161 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40337986235 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1808561744 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7857142857 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196683547335 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539547803739 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509205402584 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789923025761 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439594563811 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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